Hi! My name is Anny. My birthday is October 16th. It is in fall. The weather is very cool. On my birthday, I wear my pretty clothes. Sometimes I go hiking and fly kites in the park with my friends. Usually I have a birthday party in the evening. My parents give me a big birthday gift. I am very happy to get it. I invite many friends to my party. We eat a big beautiful birthday cake and many tasty food. We can sing, dance and play games in the party, too. I have a very good time on my birthday!

I like my birthday very much!

点评：生日那天一定是最开心的，作者写下生日的那天是在秋天，并记录下自己生日那天发生的事情，邀请朋友来生日聚会，大家一起吃蛋糕、唱歌、跳舞玩游戏，真的很开心。